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Remember leaves of seasons by ~MehreenFreed:iconMehreenFreed:



Autumn leaves
rumpled and crushed by waiting storms,
Wet footsteps
guided along as the light falls,
That remembrance
reflected through,calling quietly,
Setting days,
drowned,in the sea of grey eyes.
©2009-2010 ~MehreenFreed
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Moving on leaves a trail of memories behind.I got on the roof and looked at those wet tress which reminded me of a story I couldn't write.And here we are.Imagining seasons I haven't experienced yet.

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:iconcatgal2234:
this is lovely- the imagery and word choice make it sound very poetic. :]

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Dlaczego tak powazny?

Wchodz do ciemnej strony, my mamy ciastechki.
:iconmehreenfreed:
Thankyou so much for your lovely comment.It is greatly appreciated.
:aww:

Nature is always fun to be described and imagined.So vast and so free.

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`Can you hear it?`
`Yes.`
`It's calling-`
`My name.`
:iconcatgal2234:
you're very welcome ^^

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Dlaczego tak powazny?

Wchodz do ciemnej strony, my mamy ciastechki.
:iconandar90:
I like the feeling of going down or of of something passing away in this. My two favorite parts are "setting days" and "light falls". I just like the way those two word combination work with the feel of this poem. You have some nice imagery here as well.
:iconmehreenfreed:
Thankyou so much for such a kind comment.
:aww:
Writing is good.just move your pen with the flow of your thoughts.And TA DA!
Have a great day.
:sun:

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`Can you hear it?`
`Yes.`
`It's calling-`
`My name.`

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