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Highway traffic, seamless like the skies
of October; distant lights foretell
a visitor.
A gush of wind, a magnolia laden threshold.
Another blackout.
We share
the
    much sought after
lunacy.[Lunar/lunatic]
    I was sitting on the terrace three nights earlier. Draining my cup of tea, listening to the highway traffic: quiet; loud. The visitor is here, Winter. For the house-lights twinkle just after 6 pm. And what are we seeking? I guess, a bit of madness. Of what? The last line's where the pun's intended if, it makes sense. :earth::peace: Edit (September 22,2013): This was the most pleasant surprise. A DD? Excuse me while I :dance: :party:. I am overwhelmed by the appreciation given to this written piece. I checked this page a couple of times, just to be sure if this is real. It is. :faint: Firstly, shukariya cality for suggesting this, and Beccalicious for featuring it. :heart: And thank you for reading.
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Given 2013-09-21
Lately, the wait by ~MehreenFreed ( Suggested by cality and Featured by Beccalicious )
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alabaster-Islie Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
October breath is...
Nothing like it used to be
So quiet like me
Who never saw the black sky
As it breathed out
And I breathed in this death
At last I saw it
The moon and all its beauty
~silent somebody~
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for such a refreshing verse.
:aww:
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lollirotcat Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Writer
Love this! Congrats on the DD! :D
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. :aww:
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lollirotcat Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome! :)
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Julianne227 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great one. *.*
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading. :aww:
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Neko-The-Dragon Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013   Digital Artist
Short yet quite interesting!
Congratulations on the DD!!
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. It was quite a surprise. :party::dance::sun:
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Neko-The-Dragon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013   Digital Artist
Your welcome!
Great writing is meant to be noticed! :aww:
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