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Highway traffic, seamless like the skies
of October; distant lights foretell
a visitor.
A gush of wind, a magnolia laden threshold.
Another blackout.
We share
the
    much sought after
lunacy.[Lunar/lunatic]
    I was sitting on the terrace three nights earlier. Draining my cup of tea, listening to the highway traffic: quiet; loud. The visitor is here, Winter. For the house-lights twinkle just after 6 pm. And what are we seeking? I guess, a bit of madness. Of what? The last line's where the pun's intended if, it makes sense. :earth::peace: Edit (September 22,2013): This was the most pleasant surprise. A DD? Excuse me while I :dance: :party:. I am overwhelmed by the appreciation given to this written piece. I checked this page a couple of times, just to be sure if this is real. It is. :faint: Firstly, shukariya cality for suggesting this, and Beccalicious for featuring it. :heart: And thank you for reading.
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Given 2013-09-21
Lately, the wait by ~MehreenFreed ( Suggested by cality and Featured by Beccalicious )
:iconalabaster-islie:
October breath is...
Nothing like it used to be
So quiet like me
Who never saw the black sky
As it breathed out
And I breathed in this death
At last I saw it
The moon and all its beauty
~silent somebody~
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MehreenFreed Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for such a refreshing verse.
:aww:
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lollirotcat Sep 21, 2013  Student Writer
Love this! Congrats on the DD! :D
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MehreenFreed Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. :aww:
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lollirotcat Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome! :)
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Julianne227 Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great one. *.*
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MehreenFreed Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading. :aww:
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Neko-The-Dragon Sep 21, 2013   Digital Artist
Short yet quite interesting!
Congratulations on the DD!!
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MehreenFreed Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. It was quite a surprise. :party::dance::sun:
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Neko-The-Dragon Sep 24, 2013   Digital Artist
Your welcome!
Great writing is meant to be noticed! :aww:
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