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Highway traffic, seamless like the skies
of October; distant lights foretell
a visitor.
A gush of wind, a magnolia laden threshold.
Another blackout.
We share
the
    much sought after
lunacy.[Lunar/lunatic]
    I was sitting on the terrace three nights earlier. Draining my cup of tea, listening to the highway traffic: quiet; loud. The visitor is here, Winter. For the house-lights twinkle just after 6 pm. And what are we seeking? I guess, a bit of madness. Of what? The last line's where the pun's intended if, it makes sense. :earth::peace: Edit (September 22,2013): This was the most pleasant surprise. A DD? Excuse me while I :dance: :party:. I am overwhelmed by the appreciation given to this written piece. I checked this page a couple of times, just to be sure if this is real. It is. :faint: Firstly, shukariya cality for suggesting this, and Beccalicious for featuring it. :heart: And thank you for reading.
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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-09-21
Lately, the wait by ~MehreenFreed ( Suggested by cality and Featured by BeccaJS )
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alabaster-Islie Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
October breath is...
Nothing like it used to be
So quiet like me
Who never saw the black sky
As it breathed out
And I breathed in this death
At last I saw it
The moon and all its beauty
~silent somebody~
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for such a refreshing verse.
:aww:
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lollirotcat Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Writer
Love this! Congrats on the DD! :D
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. :aww:
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lollirotcat Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome! :)
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Julianne227 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great one. *.*
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:iconmehreenfreed:
MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading. :aww:
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Neko-The-Dragon Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013   Digital Artist
Short yet quite interesting!
Congratulations on the DD!!
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:iconmehreenfreed:
MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. It was quite a surprise. :party::dance::sun:
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Neko-The-Dragon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013   Digital Artist
Your welcome!
Great writing is meant to be noticed! :aww:
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are kind. :blush::aww:
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Neko-The-Dragon Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013   Digital Artist
:D I'm happy you think so!
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
    Have a nice day! :heart:
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your wonderful comment. :aww: Have a great day you! :sun:
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    My pleasure, thank you :happybounce:
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pinballwitch Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Congrats on DLD :nod: love the mood :)
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. It means alot. The motivation. Have a great day! :sun:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our "Pick of the Day". It is featured in a news article here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.… and on our main page.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:party::w00t:
THANK YOU for the feature. It has made my day and motivated me to write more.
Have a great day. :sun:
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
there's something enchanting to it, great atmoshpere.
love the language : )
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
coming from someone who writes so well herself, this is a compliment that makes my day. I truly appreciate it. though, I do need rooms of improvements on my English expressions. :lol:
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i'm deeply flattered : ))) still, I have tons to improve as well, english included!
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cality Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love reading your literature submissions (you should write more!).

This piece has a quiet elegance about it. Your words have a gentleness to them, but there's a lot of strength behind them, too. I lovelovelove the alliteration of 'seamless like the skies', and your formatting adds a lot of interest.
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This mere comment of yours just made my entire day even more cheerful. Thank you. But I know, you are too polite, kind. You give me so much time and so much time to other people too. I appreciate it very very very much. Peace be with you. Always.
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cality Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's always my pleasure.

Stay awesome! :heart:
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umerr2000 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i like it :)
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MehreenFreed Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww:
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